It’s awful! God, I would’ve given it a zero but here’s for effort.
Maybe writing isn’t for you? But let’s not lose hope. A dash of improvement and
practice is all I ask.
Don’t get offended! You can do better than this! Keep trying! I’m not giving up on reading
your books (;
I enjoyed it. There might be a few loose that you might want to check
It’s beautifully-written, I would never deny that, but there’s something, a little bit of something that is off and you’re missing, and I would love to see your improvements. I will still read your books.
I would have cried! It’s so beautiful, I would even add more stars! Well done!
You might be one of my favorite authors of all time!
There are times I might give this:
Just because I did not finish it doesn’t mean I am not gonna try. I will, though, in time. I cannot force myself to continue reading if I really could not tolerate more of the novel. Forgive me for this.